March 5 : Prompt: Writing is a process, and the first draft is rarely perfect. Strong writers improve their work through revision. After reviewing and revising your literary argument paragraph, what changes did you make to strengthen your writing?

 To make my writing stronger I decided to re arrange my sentences to different parts. Especially since I summarized a lot of parts I decided it would be better to rearrange to make it stronger. As well as re word the thesis statement so it would be stronger. Details from the text and stronger quotes from the article can prove a point more than just summarizing. 

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